The Rough Rough Draft

Hello everyone! So I've drafted part of my paper, and you can check it out here. It is a very rough draft as you will see, but I think that you might still get the sense of where I am planning to take my argument (I hope!) Needless to say that I will be very grateful if you could read through it and give me some feedback on what you think I can improve. To make this a little easier on you, here is a list of things that I am most concerned about:

• Can you clearly identify my argument and what I plan to talk about?- Okay so I gave a bit of a long introduction to Romanticism because it ties to my thesis, but do you think it is too long? Do you think that works for the paper?

• Are my paragraph to paragraph transitions clear? Does my paper flow so far?

• Are my thoughts well put together and coherent?

• Is my style fitting of an academic paper?

If you find anything that you think needs tweaking outside of this, though, please let me know!

Also I wanted to include an outline of my paper, just in case you wanted to see where I was going with it.

Thank you!