What I hadn't heard of (until my teacher mentioned it) is making another outline after you've written the paper to make sure it flows. What a weird concept. But I think I'll try it.
My paper's structure did change a bit after I wrote and edited it. You can compare it to my first outline here.
Outline:
Introduction
- Introduce A.A. Milne’s Winnie the Pooh stories
- Stories for children are generally to teach as they are constantly developing
- Compare to a story written to teach a lesson- The Story of Snow: The science of Winter’s Wonder by Mark Cassino
- Thesis: Although many consider nonsense literature to be purely for entertainment purposes, much nonsense literature like A.A. Milne’s Winnie the Pooh stories are actually valuable to learners because they not only help children grasp the concept of language, but they teach them how to sift out the sense from the nonsense.