Ok folks, I edited my Winnie the Pooh paper so it's the right length, not redundant and it actually makes sense. I ended up cutting entire paragraphs, combining other paragraphs, and editing down others. So much to your excitement (I'm sure) it's 6 pages and not 10.
Here is the link to read the whole paper. Feel free to read it if you want. Or read parts of it. I always love feedback.
If you care to give me some feedback, please look specifically at how well I made my argument, my grammar and tone, and how well the paper flows together.
Let me know what you think with some comment love!!
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